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Post by snickers on Nov 10, 2005 15:47:14 GMT -5
lol yea i do that like in every class doe i get bored too easily. bump bump bump
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Post by mylkshakeMODERATOR7 on Nov 11, 2005 23:32:51 GMT -5
im down wit da dipset im gone get my lips wet
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Post by snickers on Nov 13, 2005 7:11:47 GMT -5
bump bump bump like b2k
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Post by Lil Hypa gurl on Nov 13, 2005 7:12:30 GMT -5
I like dem 2
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Post by skittlesgurl17 on Nov 14, 2005 20:32:17 GMT -5
ugh my god. i have writers block and i have no idea where to pick up. i should have never ended it with that line in the first place....i'm trying...
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Post by mylkshakeMODERATOR7 on Nov 15, 2005 7:48:43 GMT -5
omfg
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Post by girlygirl on Nov 21, 2005 13:10:01 GMT -5
Come on girl were are waiting I think that the last line was great to hey guys there is this story on the B5 fourm and it is off the chain do yall want me to post it but the story isn't as good as this one
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Post by snickers on Nov 22, 2005 16:10:57 GMT -5
bump bump bump it up like joe budden lol
yea girlygirl post it on hurr who cares if it's ta do wit b5
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Post by girlygirl on Nov 22, 2005 17:16:22 GMT -5
Okay hold on BRB. Here ya go the girl said she was gonna post the thing todAY SO I AM WAITING. But this ani't my story.
~LOVE~
You approach this big house in your moms car and she pulls up to the side in front of the house.
You: Ok thanx for the ride mom....umm BYE!! Mom: y/n do you have your cell phone with you? You: MOM YES I DO FOR THE LAST TIME...so plzzz can i leave.. Mom: ok fine....but you know i dont like you going to parties on your own.. You: mom...im 16...plz just leave now...llol bye
You hug you mom good bye and get out of the car and watch her drive off, you walk up to the house and the music is blearin so loud that people outside couldnt even hear themselfs. you walk up the steps and open the door. you couldnt belive brianna pulled it off, parents away for the weekend, home alone....lol obviously she HAD to throw a party. you walked in. you were wearing a mini skirt with baby phat black and pink flip-flops and a halter top, you were looking good.
Stranger: HEY GIRL, WATS UPPP!!! CANT BELIVE YOU CAME!! You: ( you turn around) hey Brianna...dang this party is banging!( you and brianna are hugging) Brianna: i kno im sick when it comes to the parties...newayz follow me to the kitchen and help me with the food
You and Brianna walk into the kitchen...but while you were walking you notice this sexy guy stearing at you hard...when you made eye contact with him he smiled, and you turned away quickly
You: Dang girl yall have some sexy guys up in ATL Brianna: girl you aint see nuttin yet, i kno you just moved here and all but trust me gurl your gonna love it...spacially when school started in 2 days...dang You: lol cant wait....newayz girl i need to rome around...i need to b noticed Brianna: dont worry you is being noticed....look behind you
You turn around and notice the same guy from before stearing at you....
You: omg..he was stearin at me when i came in here....he is sexy..whats his name? Brianna: Dustin...yea...he got some other brothers to they is fine...but im to old for 3 of them but dang they tempt me sometimes..lol...i think he wants to talk to you..
You turn back around and noticed he was gone
You: well i guess not...newayz girl ill b bac..i need to get my groove on Brianna: iight girl but u stiff as hell and you knows that...as long as you dont break my furnisher
You laff and leave out the kitchen...while you leave you grab a drink....its bacardi, you were thinking how the hell did Bri get this? well u didnt care you was just happy that you did, you found a seat on a couch and just sat there chilling and you were drinking too...till someone disturbed you..
Stranger: whats up baby..?
You turn around to see whos breathing down your neck
You: Whos you? Stranger: Jodi....but baby you can call me what ever you want..( smiles)
You can smell the liquor on his breath, you knew he was drunk
You: well umm jodi how bout you leave me the hell alone
You couldnt even lie he was cute but something about him spelled trouble
Jodi: lol your funny....i aint going nowhere... You: what the fukk you want then? Jodi: do i really have to spell it out....you know theres some rooms upstairs if you know what i mean ( his hands slide up the middle of your thighs)
You get up and try to punch him but he to quick for and grabs your 2 arms tight and painfully..
You: OW YOUR HURTING ME GET THE HELL OFF ME YOU @$$O... Jodi: where going upstairs if you like it or not
Jodi was trying to pull you towards the stairs...everyone was watching without helping it was like they were scared to interrfer untill someone came and intruppted and tapped Jodi on the shoulders...
Stranger: um excuse me i would like for you to meet my best buddy... Jodi: huh...who?? ( he turns around toward the stranger)
It was Dustin...as soon as Jodi turned around Dustin knocked the hell outta that punk
Dustin: O Mr.Knuckles...he really wanted to say hi
Everyone started laffing...and Jodi got up and left..
Jodi: you think thats funny Dustin...ha lets see bout that ( holding is jaw)
You stear at Dustin for a long time and he finally sez something
Dustin: hi..im Dustin...whats your name? You: (laffing) y/n....umm yea thnx for the help Dustin: no problem... lets sit
You and Dustin si back in the same spot where you were and you start drinking again...
Dustin: so yea i wanted to talk to you from when you came in here You: yea...well now you are
It goes silent
Dustin: your not from around here are you? You: lol you can tell Dustin: definatly...by you move, talk, and walk...your from heaven arnt you? You: lol thats the best line you have....try harder but your rite im not from around here Dustin: ok
You feel the alchol take affect..you feel tipsy
Dustin: hold on ill brb..imma tell the dj to put something on..k dont...go...nowhere You: yes sir
He gets up and goes to the DJ with the turntables...and a toon starts playing...its sounds hot..he comes back and while the songs playing reaches out for your hand, you take it without thinking and he pulls you closer and you guys chest to chest. you cant belive that you are dancing with the sexciest guy at the party, you can smell his polo cologne and you just melt in his arms.
You: i like this song...i never heard it before thou Dustin: yea...its us You: REALLY?? wow ...us? meaning who? Dustin: Me and my bros...where called B5 You: yall are hot...and you sound sexy Dustin: as for you to...
You blush. you guys are dancing for 3 slow songs non-stop with no interruptions...untill " give me that @#$@%" comes on..you and him start to laff, you feel drunk now
Dustin: um you wanna go upstairs? You: ok
for some reason you didnt hesitate or have to think twice , you liked this guy and you wantd him for yourself, you guys go upstairs..and theres a empty room..you guys enter it and sit on the bed.
Dustin: nice room You: um yea
Silence
Dustin:y/n...i really like you...i dont know your just..different You: um .....thnx i guess Dustin: i want you to b my girl You: i dont kno i hardly kno you Dustin: it dont matter...we can get to know each other
He starts getting closer
You: umm...i guess ok Dustin: see you like me rite? You: yea...but it could just me the alcohol in my system Dustin: trust me i know it isnt
He leans over and kisses you, you cant help it ..this brother gots you helpless and you kiss him back so sexually. Then he starts lifting up your skirt..................
BUMP 4 MORE... TRUST ME THIS AINT THE END OF IT KEEP ON BUMPING AND ILL BRING YOU MORE DRAMMA LOVE AND MISERY....THIS IS A STORY YOU DONT WANNA MISS!!!
BUMP FOR MORE!! Before Dustin can slide up your skirt all the way yall was interrupted...
Bri: Dangggggg, y/n u aint evn here for a whole day and here you is whit the hottest in the party
You and Dustin get up as soon as she waslks in..
You: umm...Bri....ummm we was just talkin Bri: hmm really....iis that a knew tounge language..i aint stupid..yall was about to get down and dirty...AND EWW ON MY BED...GET OF GET OF
Brianna pushes you and Dustin outta the way and fixes her bed
Dustin: umm i should go...but
Before he reached the door he came up to you
Dustin: i wanna go out wit you 2mmarow....can i have your number? You: umm ...sure...its...
You give him your number and he writes it down and leaves..now its only you and brianna
You: omg i think im in love ( you fall on briannas newly made bed) Bri: naw i think you must b outta your dang mind...wat was you thinking...if i hadnt have come up here yall would of did the nasty on my dang bed...u kno how much these sheets cost dang man ( fixing her bed covers around you) You: dang girl you tripping...nuttin was going to happen Brianna: your horny is juust saying that...neways i came up here tell you your moms is here
You get up.
You: iight girl...lol sikk party (yall hugg) Brianna: lol w/e get the hell outta my house now You: lol bye gurl
You leav outta her room and go back downstairs, but before ou reached the door Dustin blocked you
Dustin: i want you to meet my bro
This sexy guy came up beside Dustin..
Brother: Hi ( he grabs your and and kisses it) You: o hi wats your name Brother: Patrick...dont worry i already know your name..y/n You: lol ok
You couldnt help but notice how Patrick was stearing at you...like...he wanted you
You: umm well nice to meet you Patrick Patrick: you too y/n Dustin: y/n your leavein now? You: yea...make sure you call me tommarow Dustin: iight...bye ( he hugs you)...boo
You blush when he called you that
You: ok bye
~NEXT DAY~
Your alarm goes off
You: *thinking* dang i slept in..its 1:00
You go downstairs to find your little 9yr old sister watching tv
You: wheres mom? Sister: I dont know..ask her You: what?? im asking you..you idiot Sister: ahh no name callin i didnt say nuttin rude you punk You: you gone to far jasmine...imma kik you lil skinny ass Jasmine: come try y/n
You tackle your younger sister on the floor and you guys start wrestling...you couldnt even lie she was strong but your were stronger, but then the phone rang, and she beats you to the phone
Jasmine: hello?....o y/n isnt here rite now shes licking gum off the church benches at the mom..
You grab the phone from her before she finishes
You: umm hello?....ah hi Dustin.....yea i did miss you....aww...lol...at 3:00?..sure where we going?.....umm shopping? with what money im currently broke....omg you...thank you!!!! ok...uh huh...bye..muawh
You hang up
Jasmine: ewww You: shut up
You go and find your best outfit, a pair of parasuco jeans, with a white wiifebeater and a pair of whites and you put on your gucci shades and you was ready, he said he was coming to pik up.. you heard a horn honk, you go downstairs and leave out the door and you notice a cute little boy sittin in the backseat, you aproach the nice blue topless car..dang it was a porsche
You: dang dustin you rolling Dustin: lol i know
You look at the boy
You: Hi wats you name? Boy: Bryan...how you doing You: fine...well my name is y/n....Dustin i didnt kno you was bringing company Dustin: i have my moms wants me to pick something up for him...a game i think Bryan: HA-LO...and you know it was that to you just mad Dustin: ritteeee....hop in y/n
You hop in, through out the whole ca ride dustin and bryan were joking around...you were enjoying it
Dustin: cant wait till school 2mmarow You: lol why? Dustin: i dont kno im just anxiuos...i wanted to see the fine new gurls but i dont care bout that nomore ( he stares into your eyes) Bryan: eww can yall stop You: you remind me of my lil sis..she would probably like you Bryan: i highly doubt that You: why? Dustin: he has woman issues Bryan: I DO NOT
You guys pull up to the entrance of the mall and hop out the car, you and dustin looked good together..o and bryan
Dustin: (hands you a card) here buy your heart out You: OMG r u serious..thnk thnk you you ( you hug him) are you comeing with me? Dustin: me and bryan are going to the game store, umm we will meet here..ok? You: k boo c ya later
You couldnt blive he gave you the credit card...he must of got all this money as early payment on his music, you went into all the stores and came out with 2-3 bags, you were loaded. and all of a sudden you phone rings
You: hello?
No answer
You: HELLO? Voice: dustin dont deserve you....... You: huh? who is this? Voice: i should b your man... You: patrick?
they hang up......
You wonder to yourself was that really patrick, Dustins brother, and if it was what did he mean by that
Dustin: hey babes...who was that?
Silence
You: umm...noone baby wrong number (you hug him) where are we going now? cuz i got my &*$%. Dustin: Oh..where going back to my crib, chill there for awhile
You were shocked, you really didnt want to go over there
Dustin: boo whats wrong...you look like you dont want to see someone....i only want my brothers to get fimiliar with you, seeing how your my girlfriend n all You: ok fine, its not that i didnt want to go...its just.... Bryan: srry to break this up but my hands and feet is hurting Dustin: what? your only holding ONNNEE bag with only FIVEEE SMALLL GAMES IN ITTT..alright fine weaklin lets go Bryan: I AM NOT!!!!
You guys go in the car and Dustin drives off towards his house...
Dustin: whats wrong baby you look worried ( he lifts up your shoulder) You: no im not...just cant wait Dustin: dang if you look like that when your excited....you must look excited when your sad hahaha ( he turns around to see if bryans laffing..he wasnt so he stopped and kept driving) Bryan: nerd! Dustin: I AM NOT
You think your there, its a nice house for a big family. you guys come out the car and walk up to the front door. he puts the keys in and your in.
Dustin: dont mind the mess...its because my moms not hone, they mess it up You: lol ok..so wheres everyone Dustin: downstairs Bryan: imma tell them where back..and start these games You: umm dustin wheres the bathroom i need to fix my hair Dustin: you look good as you are y/n...but its up stairs u cant miss it You: ok ( you guys kiss)
He goes downstairs while you go up, your reach the bathroom and start fixing your hair....
Brother: Hi...nice to see you again You: ( you jump) o my god...dont scare me like that again
It was Patrick
Patrick: srry i heard someone come up and i knew it was someone that hasnt been here before because my brothers walk like elephants up the stairs
You: ( you wanted to laff but didnt) Patrick did you call me earlier? Patrick: ( looked surprised) ummm You: and dont lie Patrick: (head down) yea..i did...but i got scared and hung up You: why the hell would you do that &*$%....just remember in that head of yours im Your brothers girl not yours.. Patrick: while you would of been if i was at that party before him, but he beat me to it You: (you were aggravated now) WHA..... Bryan: y/n they want you downstairs...pat dustin got new games man come on
You and Patrick stear at eachother and you leave with bryan
You: come on bryan
You and Bryan left Patrick standing there..when you reached downstairs you found 2 other brothers sitting there and you couldnt even lie, Dustins family was touched by angels fingers because they was all so cutee...to the lil one to through the big one dang
Dustin: NERDS I LIKE TO PRESENT MY GIRL ...Y/N
They all laff, you sit on the couch where all of them are, the on on the floor with the controller in his hands and darker then the other bro and the one sitting on the couch chilling had braids and looked cute also
Carnell: wats up y/n....dustin never shuts up about you Kelly: ye I probably no more about you then i know about myself You: lol hi kelly and carnell Carnell : wheres pat?
You shift uncomfortibly
Bryan: upstairs Kelly: prolly still mad You: about wat? Kelly: god only knows why
You all laugh
~MEANWHILE UPSTAIRS~
Phone rings
Patrick: Hello?.....Raven hey girlll....Dustin yea he here, guess what thou....he got a new girlfriend...yep...he over you....your gonna se about tht lol you crazy...you coming now?...but to warn you the girls here...ok...hurry thou...iight...bye Raven
Hangs up
~30 mins later~
Doorbell rings....Patrick opens it
Patrick: lol there downstairs..ill introduce you...as if they dont know you already Raven: make it quick
They walk downstairs
Patrick: umm ladies and gentlemen...RAVENNN!!!! Dustin: wtf... Raven: thats how you react dustin...after all this time You: (confused) what she tlking bout Raven: im his girlfriend... You: (jump up) WHAT!!! Dustin: Baby calm down Raven: we never official broken up Dustin: yes we are...get the hell outta my house Raven: why did we break up dustin? Dustin:you kno why? You: wth is going on h ere? Kelly: yea thats what i wanna know Dizzy Raven: soo...they dont kno ( smiles), well i guess ill tell all yall Dustin: GET THE HELL OUTTA MY HOUSE RAVEN..IM WARNING YOU You: k this is scraing me
It was getting so tense it was un-belivable
Raven: gurlly im warning you Dustin isnt who you think he is Carnell: get to the point Raven Raven:.......he got me pregnant and wanted me to get a abortion
SHOCKED You start to back away from Dustin, as you look him in his eyes[/i]
You: (Speechless) Raven: thats rite...lol...thought ur brother would tell yall Dustin: shut the hell up...umm..baby...i kno i should of told you but...
You put your hand up to block what he was sain
You: no..no dustin...its my fault for being in a relationship so quick with you Dustin: no baby... You: YES...obviously i dont know you well..umm Kelly:Dizzy...you got her pregnant? and you wanted her to kill the baby...tht aint evn cool dawg..after everything mom told us and taught us ou run and pull this stunt
Dustin didnt say nuttin...he was just stearing at you...with nothing to say
Dustin: i..dont kno wat to say y/n You: good keep it that way...im outta here...kelly can you give me a ride home plz Kelly: yea of course
You and Kelly left from downstairs and went outside to Kelly's parked car and you went in the front seat and saw Dustin and everyone coming out
Dustin: y/n plz dont leave im sorry...we can start over...no secrets...
You ignored him while Kelly went in the drivers seat
Dustin: dont you want your &*$% that i fukkin bought for you You: fukk you negro and keep your &*$% Dustin: what ever
He flicked his hands in a rude way and went into the house before Kelly drove off. It was quite in the car for awhile...you didnt mind the silence this time
Kelly: im sorry bout my brother You: its ok Kelly: no it isnt...if i had known... You: for real..its ok kelly Kelly: dang...imsooo shocked and pissed You:yea well its my fault...i should of gotten to kno him Kelly: well if it helps he always talked about you... lol dang i knew more about you thn i knew my ABC's You: well....yea i guess
You arrived home and said your goodbye and hug to kelly
Kelly: he really like you y/n and i was serious bout what i said..sleep on it You: yea...if tht really helps Kelly: it will...bye
He drove off
~MEANWHILE AT DUSTINS HOUSE~
Bryan: Dustin i cant belive you, why? Dustin: i wasnt ready for no kid Carnell: thn next time your horny ass should WRAP-IT UP Dustin: shut up u kno nuttin bout girls Carnell: i kno enuff to no not to get one pregnant when im young Dustin: what wver Carnell: and if i do...i would take responsibilities Dustin: ha your sain that now but watch what happens..i dont wanna tlk about this nomore...wheres pat and Raven?> Bryan: they upstairs Dustin: well imma see what they up too
He leaves
~IN PATRICKS ROOM~
Him and Raven were sitting on the bed talking
Patrick: lol dang girl you goood ...did u see there faces lol Raven: lol i kno and that bittch y/n trying to come up on my man dont think soo Patrick: dont tlk about her like that....this is a good plan thou..you do this and you get what you want..which is dizzy...and i get what i want..y/n Raven: ok...how come you always stealin dustins girls thou Patrick: shut up you liked me and you couldnt get off me Raven: well you could of stopped me...and me and my stupid self...doing it with you wit no protection Patrick: well i...for got iight..shut up..as long as Dustin thinks that he got you pregnant Raven: llol dang, this is fun..he gonna come crawlin back to me Patrick: and y/n is gonna be my girl..
Before he can finish they heard a sound by the door and turned around slowly and to there horror Dustin was standing there...he heard everything
BUMP FOR MORRRREEEE
IM ON FIRE I FEEL IT COMING
Pat and Raven were soo shocked by the interruption of Dustin. Patrick starts to get up
Patrick: umm wats up bro ( nervous) Dustin: oh nothing, i thought i would come up hear to see what my little brother and my stupid ex is doing up here ( sly smile) and to my surprise i find out that you and Raven are up this whole..drama..( unfolds arms and walks closer) Patrick: now.now...D-Dustin, calm down..u didnt hear nething...ur over reactaing Dustin: OVER REACTING....u kno what..i should of known...should of read the signs
He starts getting closer, patrick is walking so far back that he stumbles on the bed and falls on his back on the mattress
Patrick: what signs....frgg it..YOU DONT DESERVE HER Dustin: lol and you do? Patrick: yes i do Dustin: I LUV HER Patrick: (shocked) luv her?? u do understand u only knew her for a week..how can u luv her Dustin: i do and i dont need ur big head messing it up...but wait
Dustin moves back....
Dustin: you mean to tell me...Raven...that wasnt my kid you were pregnant with?
She didnt answer
Dustin: but it was ur kid Patrick? lol wow Patrick: n-n-no Dustin: u kno wat....im going to put both of you at the end of your misery...your going to wish you nv did me wrong again Patrick: Dustin calm down
Dustin walks closer to pat and all of a sudden punches pat in the face
Raven: AHHHHHH OMG SOMEONE HELPPP
He kicks pat in the back and before he can e kick him again pat grabs his legs and elbows him in his balls, Dustin yelped in pain. But he wasnt going down that easily, pat was trying to get up but was having difficulties cuz of the pain in his back as soon as he got up he felt a hard fist connect with his gut...and before dustin can do it again he felt a hand throw him into the tv....it was Kelly
Kelly: WTF R U DOING DUSTIN....HITTIN HIM LIKE THT Dustin: (breathing hard) HE DID ME WRONG HES SUPPOSES TO BE MY BROTHER AND HE PULLS THIS STUNT Kelly: what is you tlkin about....Raven wats going on Raven: um um i h-have t-to go
She leaves and they hear the downstairs door slam, they heard pairs of feet running up the stairs
Carnell: what happened Bryan: we heard screaming Kelly: thats what i wanna know
Patrick was still crouched over from the pain..looking like her was ready to throw up
Patrick: nuttin...nuttin happened Dustin: (astonished) NOTHING HAPPENED? U HAVE THE NERVE....Y DONT U TELL YOUR BROHERS WAT U DID PAT
Pat didnt answer...he was still breathing hard
Dustin: or should I? Patrick: you know what...im outta hear i aint staying here nomore Carnell: what? u cant leave Patrick: why not...i can see im not wanted here Kelly: ok pat we dont care wat happened but plz dont leave...remember where making are music video tommarow so you cant leave...this is are future Patrick: ( wasnt saying nuttin) Bryan: yea and if you leave now its gone its ruined...the money, the fame Patrick: FINE DAMMIT ILL STAY...but im only doing it for the money....not for none of yall
And with that he left out of his own room....
Patrick: what hell....yall get out of my room
They all left,,,and with last evil glare at Dustin, pat closed the door
~AT HOME~
Your mom wasnt home as usual just you and your sister but your sister was leaving to go to a sleep over, you order a box of pizza and munch on it by yourself and closed the door after your sister
You: by jazzy Jasmine: Bye
She left ..and the phone rang, you ran in the kitchen and answered it
You: hello? Voice: hey wats up You: Patrick? um hey Patrick: um i wanted to know if i can talk to you You: 2nite is not good patrick Patrick: plz...my brothers are pissing me off You: umm Patrick: i need someone to talk to You: (sighs) ok fine but not for long Patrick: k im coming over You: ahhh Patrick: plz i know you dont want to come here and evn if you do dustin will nv stop bothering you and i wont be able to talk to you You: ok fine Patrick: ok thnx ill b there in a hour...im takin the bus You: y dont u ask Kelly for a ride Patrick..umm its alrite i like the bus You: lol ok..bye You: bye y/n
Hangs up, you were curious to know what pat wanted to tlk to you about, you hope it wasnt about Dustin cuz u didnt evn want to think about him rite now...so you cleaned up, took a shower, changed into something comfortable, a white wife beater with basketball shorts..u didnt care u wernt going 2 impress patrick...so y did u care how u look? newayz you go downstairs on the computer on msn and started talking to Brianna and told her all the drama, you kind of knew what she was going to say, she found the whole thing funny and it was my fault blah blah blah. so u tol her bye and signed off..
The Door Bell Rang...... he was here
BUMP FOR MORE you get up outta the chair and open the door...
You: um hi Patrick
Something was wrong he didnt look like he slept in days which was weird because you seen him 3 hours ago and he looked..umm younger...
Patrick: hey..can i come in You: no Patrick: what?? You: im playing lol comin Patrick: lol you funny
he walked in and went in the living room on the couch
You: um Patrick...why do you look like that? Patrick: huh..o you noticed..sit down You: yea ( you sat) Patrick: yea..well me and Dustin got in a big fist fight You: (gasp) omg..for what...after i left Patrick: a stupid reason..hes dilusional...and yea after you left You: omg dang Patrick: yea You: thats why you wanted to talk Patrick: yea..i couldnt stay there nomore
Hey Guys I will post the rest later I got basketball Practice.
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Post by girlygirl on Nov 22, 2005 22:37:45 GMT -5
Yall like it because if yall don't I ani't postin the rest so can yall say somthin.
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Post by Lil Hypa gurl on Nov 23, 2005 17:27:39 GMT -5
I LOOOOOVEE IT cause its G to da O to da O to da D betta dan good its great I dont like itt I LLLLLLLOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVEEEEEEE IIITTTT and BUMP BUMP BUMP BUMP BUMP BUMP BUMP DIS TYTE STORIES UPS
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Post by skittlesgurl17 on Nov 24, 2005 13:14:12 GMT -5
now i'm confused since we have 2 storys on here now. but i finally found out where to pick it up from the last time. so heres the oringinal story.
//Part 4// Me and Kiara sat down at a round table off to the side of the lunch room, by the wall. “so” she said to me smiling at me all weird, “whats going on with you and Patrick?” she said “nothin. We were just talkin like I said, and we gonna hang like friends. that’s all” “with ur boyfriend and his girlfriend?” she asked “not exactly, just us, I mean we don’t gotta bring them everywhere.” “umm hmm ok” she said smiling at me still, “do you like him?” “now what kind of question is that?!, I’m going out with Jarell.” “So. You can be wit somebody but like someone else. Its not illegal.” she said lookin at me “Well?… Do you?!” “I don’t know..” she gave me that look. “don’t try to hide nothin, I saw those smiles you guys were givin eachother” “….maybe a little… but you cant blame me, the boy is fine.” “umm hmm and speakin of the boy he’s commin over here right now.” she said and pretended to look interested in her school lunch. I blushed and just looked down tryin to contain my smile. “hey Samara,Kiara” “so Mara we still on for tonight?” “uh yeah, see you at 6” trying not to get to into it while Ki was next to me “Aight cool, see ya then” he said touched my hand and walked away. I just sighed with excitement as I placed my face in my hands. “and just what are you doing tonight?” she said still smiling that chessey ass grin I pushed my hair back, as it just fell back into my face and smiled at her “nothin just goin out for ice cream and chillin at his place. Nothin special, we just hanging. it aint a date.” I sighed. “I see, and how did this come about?” “what chu mean?” “him and you talkin after all this time” “he… he saw me and Jarell in the hall earlier and stuff and… you wanna read the notes?” I asked her. I mean after all she was my best friend she should know what really happened. “yeah!” she said as she shook her head. …after she read the notes she just kinda stared there, and then she blew up! “ I cant believe that- that- ugh! Had the nerve to go and hit you! Oh Imma whoop his-” “Calm down KiKi!” I told her grabbing his arm and pulling her back down into her seat “he only slapped me” “only slapped you?! Well Imma slap him, he wont even know what day it is!” she just kinda sat there and breathed for a minute. “….Patrick is mad sweet though” “yeah I know, and it was his idea to go out alone.” “but it was your idea to go out.” “yeah….” I said goin off into a daze not really thinkin bout anything in particular. “does it happen often?” “what?!” I said just slowly turning to her coming out of my daze. “ no of course not” I said shaking my head at her. “cuz you know you can tell me. I’m your best friend you can tell me anything.” she said in a concerned voice, you could see the worried look on her face. “don’t worry girl, I’m alright” I said smiling at her. The bell soon rang for next block, I got more and more excited since it was getting nearer to the end of the day. I went to my locker to get my note book and Jarell came up to my locker. “hey ma” he said and tried to kiss me, I backed away. “not here” I said goin back to my books “you commin over to chill tonight?” he said tryin to hug me from behind. Now usually I’d like this, but not today, I wasn’t in the mood to deal with him. I had better things to think about if you know what I mean. “nope. I got other plans, sorry” And that made him mad. “and what chu doin that’s more important.”he said actin like he was my father which he aint to I don’t know why he tryin to act like he got authority. “none of ya business, I just got other plans. You know my world don’t revolve around you. I’m goin to hang with a friend” “who that?” “none of ya business” I said and shut my locker. “look I gotta go to my class I’ll see you lata… maybe.” I said and walked away. That felt really good, to stand up to him like that…. And even though it felt good. I knew it was goin to get me in trouble later…
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Post by Lil Hypa gurl on Nov 24, 2005 13:24:05 GMT -5
BUMP BUMP BUMP BUMP dis up ooooooo Jarell u need some counsellin to channel out all dat anger u have
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Post by mylkshakeMODERATOR7 on Nov 25, 2005 12:58:45 GMT -5
damn yall got sum long ass storys
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Post by girlygirl on Nov 25, 2005 15:14:58 GMT -5
Yeah that is true but it is better to have them long than have them very short and be postin bumps all day don't forget yall the party tonight. Bump Bump bump bump
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